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©2005-2009 `rayvinazn
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I think it looks pretty decent, but it still needs some work, and I can't quite put my finger on what; help me out here.

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:iconnayialovecat:
Very fine :D

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:iconkungfugenius:
I may disagree with you elsewhere, but I can agree that you have some cool stuff in your gallery. I really like this, The blues and blacks give a very coll and peaceful look. As far as what needs work, the right side seems just a little empty to me.

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:iconbluefinger:
Needs more blue.... :D .... only joking, if you want to improve the picture, perhaps improving the atmospheric effect on the planet, but that's the only thing i can think of.... besides, its a great pic. Fav time!!! :+fav:

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:iconrayvinazn:
Thank you; I was a bit wary of using blue because of the rather common overuse of the colour, but I suppose everyone should have one blue Spacescape in their gallery. The right side is rather empty, but I couldn't think of anything to add without crowding the piece.

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:iconrayvinazn:
I think I over-erased at the top...I should go in and fix it. Looking at it now, a bit of a lighting effect on the planet surface wouldn't hurt either.

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Dusted.
:iconbluefinger:
Well, i think the pic looks good even if it could do with a little tweaking.

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:iconkungfugenius:
Maybe a spiral galaxy? Nothing too bright/big though, because that would obviously detract from the planet.

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:iconrayvinazn:
I'd love to...now all I need to do is figure out how to make one.

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Dusted.
:iconfarblade:
Personally, i think the planet needs a bit more defining. The light would reach a bit furthur on your planet to the center. I'd also add a bit more variating color to the stars... not all stars are blue- actually i think its not a lot of stars are blue. But other than those 2 factors, everything is pretty good.

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:iconrayvinazn:
Thanks; I know it still needs a lot of work; hopefully the one I have in the works right now will turn out better.

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